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The sun.I want to be the sun all cheerful and nice,But i can't there's Something always pulling me back to the way i use to be,Where my life was a tragity.My friends they love me they've shown me the light,But something in my heart just does'nt feel right i try and i try but its a swing and a miss i cant be the sun for im the eclipse.
- by Kimi_Airen_Nakama321 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/30/2010 |
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- Title: Eclipse
- Artist: Kimi_Airen_Nakama321
- Description: Its a poem about how i want to become like the sun but im not able to
- Date: 10/30/2010
- Tags: eclipse
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- damp baguette - 01/23/2011
- This is really good,keep it up, and maybe some more punctuation so it is easier to read?
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