Memory

• Artist: Masquerade of Dark
• Description: I wrote this poem for my english class and its about where i used to live and how i miss it
  
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• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: memory poem feelings school

This one thought brings a world of regret.
But i strive to make sure I'll never forget

That last look, that slight glance.
I wish i could have a second chance.

Those thoughts of the wondrous times we spent.
I will hold on to them where ever I'm sent.

This will lay embeded for the rest of my life.
Though it brings more pain then the sharpest knife

This i hold on to till my dying breath.
This I hold on to till the moment of death.

These memories can not be broken or taken.
I'll make sure these memories are never forsaken.

Comments

[Elder Shields]

Thats really gewd i love it ^_^

[White Angel-Momo]

My eyes are watering, seriously I cant say how sweet that is, dont think it's weird for a guy to write poems, It's SO CUTE <3 Keep it up and you can put it to a career...ewww...adult word! lol Beautiful...^^ Smile!
Momo^^

[Kukiko-San]

Wow thats a really good poem. I no exactly how u feel

[samoas677]

that poem was great, i kinda know how you feel, smile

[sweetstrawberryslice]

wooow nice poem my friend plz check mine 2 but its great

[Herb N Haler]

u no i loved it biggrin xx

[gothic-vampire-girl88]

wow that's good.