- a girl named onix tadikichi sits down at the kitchen,her life passes before her eyes as she inhaled the darkness,the walls closed in on her as she rushed to the stairs to her room,the stairs seemed to be going further every time she took a step! she crashes into the couch as she gets dizzy,and she asks herself "why me?" as her mom tells her shes going to school this year....
- by Kishin_Mistress |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: death by school
- Artist: Kishin_Mistress
- Description: this is about a girl who hates school so muchsshe sees things
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: poetry insanity
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Comments (7 Comments)
- EclipseMouse - 07/05/2009
- Blasted Emos
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- Kishin_Mistress - 07/02/2009
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thx,i think
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- Bunny Said Bang - 06/26/2009
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Wow...
Ikinda agree with FreakiiPanda but iGive you props for making it sound like a nightmare. P.S you did put punctuation in it... - Report As Spam
- Kishin_Mistress - 06/22/2009
- ******** you FreakishPanda!
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- hollister7200 - 06/19/2009
- LMAO
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- FreakiiPanda - 06/19/2009
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1. That's not a poem.
2. It's a run-on sentence.
3. The description and content are reversed.
4. It's not that original.
5. Try punctuation. - Report As Spam
- XxImmortal_MachinexX - 06/16/2009
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ummmmm...*yawn*super blan,super boring.
but i'll give u props on the fictional erieness.
but why is she seeing things and why dose she care if she has to go to school???hmmm... - Report As Spam
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