Someone's Imperfection

• Artist: Mecca Against Reality
• Description: This poem has been very confusing to the few people who have read it. I had to break it down and tell them the meaning of certain phrases and why they were there.
  
  I wrote this a few months ago when I was feeling imperfect. I thought that nothing I did would let anyone see me in a brighter light.
  
  Hope you enjoy it.
  
  
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: someones imperfection

Pliant under fingertips,
Quieter than sound.
Tighter than hinged doors,
Solid; profound.

Used as clay
Dulled and moulded,
Shaped and unknown
Bruised and folded.

Silent from years:
Pushed; still an imperfection,
Locked under the weight
Yet shoved in every direction.

Screaming pleas ring
Yearning to be heard,
Tucked into corners
Never once stirred.

The beauty of the smile
One which have yet to be seen,
Complications; other matters...
Still -- someone's imperfection.

Comments

[gokushin540]

yall som edummies i know what he ment still abit confusing.

[Ms Make Me Smile]

i loved it,it seemed like it looked as if it didnt really know where it was going at parts until you read the last line,it probably is confusing to people that dont know about poetry or things among that,i really liked the ryming and the rythm 5/5

[iBrightScales]

Don't listen to anyone else.
It's not that it's confusing, it's that people don't like to use their minds.
I love your poem.
It's amazing <3

[gokushin540]

wooooo we want more. could be bit better and less confusing.

[the_ashen_child]

i really don't get it(you're right its confuseing)
but don't worry about having imperfectios! nobody's perfect! and as long as your happy with who you are then there's really no porblem! (personal advice would be((if you don't already)) try going to church)