Dark

• Artist: Reneeness
• Description: I used to love writing poems when I was younger. This poem is sorta gloomy from when my pet died.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: dark

Dark

A tear runs down your cheek as it meets the page
As you write the words, 'good bye',
You plan to leave this world behind

Time has passed and you're ok,
Taking things day by day
Hoping this is how it'll stay

Fitting in is a terrible task,
Longing to fill the half empty flask
But now you've found a friend to love
And away from the dark you shove

Comments

[perles]

Bonne

[chanteyd]

That's really good!

[joen_kades]

you must have loved your pet... good quality poem, 4/5

[detroits_angel]

I like it, but I think you have some things that your holding back. Keep writting, you'll see. But uh I really like the sense of emotion in this poem good job :}

[Ms_Haruhi_Suzumiya]

aww

[tekeydie]

thats really good i live the line "And away from the dark you shove"