Love's Woes and Glows by Trace

• Artist: TercesX
• Description: ^^ Hello all! Here's a poem I made!
  
  For Full Description-
  http://tercesx.deviantart.com/art/Love-s-Woes-and-Glows-A-Poem-84464197
  
  
  A class assignment where I had to take an abstract concept and describe it using metaphor, simile, and personification.
  
  Oh, and the picture is a roleplay picture I use. Trace is my alter ego.
  
  I did not make the picture, I just edited it.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: abstract love simile personification metaphor

Love glares at your from the darkness
And smiles from the light
A double agent slipping in and out
An owl swooping down in the night
Love could be your angel
Healing and singing so serene
Or it can burn you to a crisp
From the inferno, love is your dearest fiend

Love is like a battlefield
Where our hearts go to war
Castles looming as our bodies
Fighters struggling to their core
Medics seem to finally cure you
From life’s love-sick destiny
But there will never be a victor
And you and your lover will never be free

Love is Gravity
Pulling you in with it’s strong pull
Love keeps you down to earth
While you keep soaring like a gull
Love circles you ‘round the globe
And always makes you fall
Love can’t always rise you up
To defy it, then you defy it all

Comments

[Grusius]

love is truly an strange thing! 5/5

[Hikari3747]

That a wonderful poem