Storm

• Artist: Haseo Hyuuga
• Description: Meh, at the end it was a little forced, I think I could have done better though now that I reread it.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: storm rain lightning wind

Storm

By Haseo Hyuuga

Thunder will quake,
Thunder will growl,
Yet was it brings is not foul.
It marks the nourishment of this world.

With thunder comes lightning,
With lightning comes rain,
With rain comes a promise,
Of life renewed.

Winds gust rapidly,
Wailing and flailing,
Pushing the storm,
To new grounds unpure.

With time the storm will settle,
With time the storm will rest,
And Earth will bloom again.

Comments

[Akeioni]

*Jaw drops*
That was amazing.

1st of all, I want to say thank you for the comment on my poem.

2nd of all, I love your poem to death.
It's really well explained.
And it makes me want a storm to hit. =[

5/5. ^_^

[the cheesecake villan]

wow, I really like it, and I kinda agree with your description, it does seem a little forced at times, but overall, I'd give it a 5 star

[Duckey5393]

um....i have one word to tell you...





























amazing

[Karak15]

Wow it's awesome. I always try to write and elemental balance poem but it never works out. I wanna see more of your stuff.

[green pigeon]

its pretty good i like it, hope to read more poems from you soon!