My Reality

• Artist: Jypsi Queen
• Description: Something I wrote a little while back, when I was going through a very difficult time......and, this is NOT about an eating disorder like everyone who reads it seems to think!
  
  
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: depression life fear pain bipolar

Perfection at it's best

these lies come so easily

a mix of truth and tales

combine to form deception

a configuration of words

slowly stabbing a wounded heart

buying your words

for what little they're worth

tears touch cheeks

of a pale bitter face

and slide down

to burn broken lips

painfully awaken

from a dram of distress

only to find it's my reality.

Comments

[ShugoCharaRoxMySocks]

thts beautiful!!! i undrstand ur pain. crying lol

[-lady hird-]

<3 luff it.
Now...How do i vote?XD

[januarypriestess]

i love this kind of poetry! this one is representing me too! i hate when i'm heartbroken! and i'm like that so many times... sad i love your poetry! well done!^^

[angelbaskets]

Not sure why someone would think it is about an eating disorder. To me it speaks of the pain of being lied to by someone you love and trust. Great job sweetie!

[Dellanora]

i think the eating disorder misconception comes from the part about perfection at its best. i think u did a great job, especially with the choice of words!