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The first time I met you,
You told me life was like a desert.
Barren and wasted.
And I pondered and told you
Life was more like a flower
Waiting to bloom.
And you said I was stupid
And the world hadn't gotten to me yet
On the way home with you,
You told me your glass was half empty
And asked me what I thought of that.
And I shrugged, and told you
If it bothers you so much, get a refill.
And you got angry
And stormed away.
The night I took you to prom,
You told me there was no future for you,
That you'd given up all hope.
And I held you close to me, and told you
If you've given up,
I can give you mine
And we can share a future.
The day I found you
In your bathroom
The bottle laying on the floor next to you
You said you didn't care
It didn't matter
Love was a lie
Beauty even more so
And I called the number
And held your hair as you heaved
And waited for you to return
Watching
As you went away in the ambulance
The day I met you again
It seemed like the first time
But this time
You took my hand
And you looked in my eyes
And asked if I would help you
Start over
And teach you to see the beauty and hope
You so craved
- by Monsieur Moon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: You
- Artist: Monsieur Moon
- Description: A longer bit of poetry. Enjoy!
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: love poerty
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Comments (7 Comments)
- x-FlipCwalker - 09/27/2008
- that is so sweet
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- K a i j u K u n - 07/26/2008
- That was romantic, and at the same time held sadness. True brilliance.
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- Samael Morel - 07/22/2008
- Wow, this is so powerful. It was sad and sweet all at the same time. I loved it.
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- Porkalicious Bacon - 07/16/2008
- Wow, that's beautiful.
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- interracial - 07/16/2008
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THIS. IS. BRILLIANT.
And awesome.
I really love it. - Report As Spam
- Ace Ryn Knight - 07/16/2008
- The last three lines of stanza three feel a little unclear, but aside from that it's marvelous! Stanza two made me laugh. This is brilliant.
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- otakuskater - 07/16/2008
- Wow! That is all i can say.
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