Sword

• Artist: Xxgodess_of_thunderxX
• Description: this is a concrete poem i wrote one day when i was sword fighting out in the woods with a few friends. i hope you enjoy it :), i got 100 on it for a school paper..
• Date: 07/16/2008
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Sword
at the same time
they cause
a life to be lost they
save one too
gliding through
the air slashing
in the hands
of protectors
glimmering
metalic
weapon
gracefully
rehearsed
many stories are with
a blade
made with the
hands of
a blacksmith
weilded by
Knights

Comments

[Matthew the Hammer]

definetly one of your better works and the the words roll off the tongue nicely nicely done

[Xxgodess_of_thunderxX]

a concrete poem is the shape of the subject the form i have is the closest i have to a sword. the original i did for school looked more like a sword.

[Tibix]

I used to sword fight i quit but you did a wonderful job on the poem

[ekitten614]

Wow, I really like it. I like how you mention it ends a life and also saves one. I think it might be really cool if you could make the shape of a poem look like a sword... just an idea, I don't know if that would be possible. : D Great job!