Broken hearts

• Artist: Jawsi
• Description: A little text about why you shouldn't break someones heart.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: broken heart

''Love'' is but a word to those who do not feel it, who are left with their hearts broken. Inside of these hearts, hate is born and takes away the sorrow. But though the sorrow disappears, the hate grows stronger. And when hate overcome hearts, they do not know what makes them unhappy. Some have so deep scars of envy that they don't even know what makes them happy.
So for that reason...
Never ever break someone's heart.

Comments

[angel of renown]

Well i don't think people like breaking hearts so i don't agree with the poem but i like how u projected it

[michellie-87]

just a bit of constructive criticism...
it is good, hard to figure out though. I think too much is squished into this one paragraph, and it doesn't all fit together right...
4/5