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• Artist: Karak15
• Description: Personaly I find this poem to be a bit obvious in what it says but that might just be because I wrote it lol. It is about the unity of humanity no matter what you believe in. I'm not entirely happy with the flow of the poem, but I still like it...
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: unity family

Pain,
Disappointment,
Shattered hopes,
Joy shared,
And anger relieved,
This is the course,
Of a family.
A forgotten Truth,
Among the world,
In the eyes of the Lord,
In the eyes of a swimming microorganism,
We are one.
Not only in the sense of a country,
Not only in the sense of a school,
But on a much bigger scale,
Bigger than the world,
For since the beginning of time,
We have,
And always will be,
A Family.

Comments

[MewSugar15]

its good, nice job 3nodding

[Viral Agent]

It's one of the less popular topics, but I've still heard it hundreds of times.
You might want to try something a bit less obvious.

[whatwhat47]

it good