Heart and Soul

• Artist: Emy10120
• Description: I wrote this one day, after watching a sad love movie.
• Date: 07/16/2008
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Love is to hate
Like black is to white.
You are my baby
The love of my life.

You're what I always wanted
And you light up my life.
Sometimes at night...
I dream of being your wife.

When I'm with you...
And I see that glowing smile
It makes me happy
And with that smile you'll never be senile.

I love the way you love me
And that your always there.
For when you hug and kiss me
I know you really care.

So with this poem I want you to know
That I love you with all my heart and soul.

Comments

[princy_pao]

I felt the same smile .nice work!!

[Emy10120]

Thank you so much for all the comments, you guys are making me a better poet smile

[redneck jesus]

i feel your pain emy!

[XX-Emma Uchiha-XX]

I like the poem, but the syllables aren't quite right, so it sounds funny. For example, I think at the end you should have made it four lines, and put it like this, "So with this poem/I want you to know/I love you with all of my heart/And all of my soul." I still think it's incredible though. 5/5.

[Ryan Russell]

Well, the only issue I have with this poem is that love and hate are not opposites-the opposite of love is uncaring; having no emotion at all. The fact that there is hate indicates a strong emotion fueled by something else-typically love, betrayal of love, or confused love.

[MuNkEy_LuVr]

ah thats a really nice poem u got there