exageration in its truest form

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: ok its a collection of couplets that are all conected so they make a full poem.hope you like!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: couplets exagerationinitstruestform srdsakura

i like you, you love me
i care for you, you breath for me

i enjoy you, you adore me
i laugh, you are histerical

i miss you, you feel nothing
i am saddened by you, you feel nothing

i love you now, you loved me then
i cared for you, you died for me

by srd sakura

Comments

[Mecca Against Reality]

I like this poem the best out of the rest of yours. You made little spellings mistakes, but what I enjoyed the most was truths of the exaggerations. Keep it up!