n00bs..

• Artist: Snake_Escape
• Description: ........who?......
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: noob starerclothes money poem snake

I haven't any time to bare
I haven't any gold to share
I haven't any thoughts to tear
I haven't any feelings to care

I haven't have to any items to trade
I have a lot of depts to be paid
*"Lok, lok at dis avi I mde!"
You wear starter clothes,
That's kinda lame.

-Snakey

*= noob talking.

Comments

[XxLinkXMidnaxX]

I don't like it. You made fun of people starting out. You were like that too once. Even the most elite players were. I absolutely hate it. Delete me if you want, it's only true.

[I Sarbear I]

I love it :3
It reflects on my bitter hatred of Noobs <;3
Bravo <3

[Haseo Hyuuga]

Just doesn't really appeal to me. There's one typo beside the noob talking that I've found. The word "depts" I think you meant to spell it debts.

[IconicRaven]

Length would greatly improve this piece.
But I liked it. 3/5

[Pixie Dreamer]

next time make it more funny and more people will like it! well i love it!

[Tatekawa]

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[computercat5]

He meant to do that. It has quotes around it, it's the noob talking. Awesome poem! I love that you wrote one about noobs.