Trapped

• Artist: Itachi Girl5
• Description: Its basically about people's souls who want to be free, but because the person is unable to roam as they will, their trapped on this earth until they die.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: trapped freedom misery dreams hope

I'm shackled to the earth,
my freedom taken away.
No were to move or go,
no where to run with the wind.
Impossible to be free.

I'm bound to the earth,
forced to be captive.
Freedom is what I wish
freedom is what I want.
My freedom is in my head,
a world that can never be obtained.

I'm trapped on this damned planet,
my soul contained in a body that doesn't feel like mine.
I'm a prisoner, forced to never obtain my dreams,
forced to live in a false fantasy.

I can never become free,
never to have hope to live my true life.
If I could have one true wish it would be:
for me and anyone else who shares the feelings of being trapped,
to have true freedom.

Comments

[Nerokimatsunaka]

unique.............5/5...........

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

Your last two stanzas don't flow with the rest of them.
Also it's nowhere, not the two versions you have.
=)

[Waterbending-Otaku]

More of the reason it'd be a challenge.

[SungJewel]

But i don't like happy poems though crying lol

[Waterbending-Otaku]

Mmmm, Itachi. Nice work. Personally, this poem makes me feel sad, like I -am- bound to the earth. I dunno, I think you should *try* uplifting poems, because if you can put this tone into a poem- this emotion, then maybe you should try a happy, lighter emotion? I know its harder, but it will be a personal challenge for you. >3