Poor Poor Boy

• Artist: Orange_Green4EVA
• Description: He was finaally alone,he finnaly got what he wanted,when he suddenly realised,he never wanted it at all.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: alonedespairkukiwallyknd

He walked the empty room's
Hoping to hear her voice.
Suddenly he realized he would never hear that noise.
Surrounded in empitiness,darkness and despair.
He looked at a note and saw what was written there.
"I know you'll never love me,the way I love you,
So now we have to say goodbye I'm so sorry but were through"
He held the note to his heart,
Hoping it was a dream,he suddenly realized he should've never been so mean.
Now she was gone,the only one who loved him,
now he was alone,no one was there to hug him.
He read the note again,really hpoing he had misread,
when he realized he had'nt he just let go.
The tears streaming down his face,they came down really slow.
He went to the kitchen grabbed a knife,and decided to say goodbye,
To the one he loved dearly,now it was his turn to pay the price.

Comments

[Kaiuc00]

to be honest, it alil depressing and the ending is kind of a downer my suggestion is with sumtin like this go for the guy learning a lesson and have the note save him from himself

[Orange_Green4EVA]

People plz leave meh comments It helps when u do,and dont just skim through it read it and rate it if u dont like it give meh whatever u feel I deserve,if you do like rate it what you think it deserves thanks! biggrin