No

• Artist: destasaur
• Description: this sounds like a depressing, or emo as someone called it, poem. i guess thats what you could call it. but its about a hard time that im going through. it explains alot about whats going on in my mind and my life.
• Date: 07/17/2008
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Whats happening to me?
Im not the same girl you used to know
The pain is so harsh it hurts to breathe
I just want this all to go
Somedays my vision is so blurred I cant see
I relax as i feel the blood flow
No one ever hears my plea
From my eyes tears pour
and thunder as they crash
Even I dont know what I do this for
I cant say how long this will last
Because I dont even know
I hold my head in my hands
as loud as I can I scream "No!"
Walking as far as I can
I want to leave,
but what have I to give?
Why is it that you cant see
I want to live!
but this pain makes me want to die
Everyday screaming out "No!"
Everynight tears I cry
How I wish you could know
How I wish you could see
just how much you mean to me
When will all this ease?
When will I be able to live without this pain?
but this cannot be pleased
No one sees me in the pouring rain
Dont do it
With every punch thats all I think
Sometimes I think life is one big trick
Tears fall everytime I blink
I cant go on like this
I have to stop I know
Your presence I truely miss
Will anyone outside my life understand or even know?
the answer to that is a simple No

Comments

[Dr.LLP BunBun]

Wonderful poem, though you could have written it a bit smoother.

[RoseMeadow]

i agree but life is just full of surprises nice poem very lovely =3

[Little Miss Rigor Mortis]

What A lovely poem...I share your emotions. Beautifully written. 5 stars!