The Night

• Artist: -VSF-Gaara
• Description: this was writen by me in 6th grade and was published in our own books. when i sa we could submit stuff like that, i dug it up and put mine down. only 28 copies of the book were made for the class. i know its not all that good but thats all i could come up with in 2 days with a hour each day to think about it
• Date: 07/17/2008
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You start to feel
Perplexed and delusional
You start to hear
Disconfigured sounds,
Wind howling
Bushes rustling
Raccoons tipping over
Garbage cans

Bug-eyed owls hooting
Crickets chirping
Drunk drivers
Getting into accidents
Mosquitoes drinking
People's blood
Bats eating bugs
Wolves stalking
Their pray

Only things seen,
Moon and stars
lighting the sky
Fireflies and streetlights
Flickering

You start to dose
Off into a
Deep sleep,
Awoken in the
Morning by the
Brush of a
Squirrel's tail

Comments

[The Quotient of 42 and 0]

character limit (how annoying ._.) 5 stars smile

[The Quotient of 42 and 0]

That was awesome, I really enjoyed that. On occasion, I go through the poetry on gaia and they are not all the same but they really emit the same feeling. And it's not very good, sometimes I physically wince after reading half of it because it's all sob and emo and crap, or about a crush, or both mixed. But this one, your's, is dark but in a unique, somewhat eerie, and very truthful way. It puts you in a world with a good balance of abstract and concrete- I would type more but this has a 500 cha

[Mighty Darth ducky]

ur right i did like it

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