when where together

• Artist: chulita1127
• Description: this was writen for a special some one in my life thats my bf and well i just got inspired
• Date: 07/17/2008
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when where together i fee like im my own world, with you theres just no preacupations when where not together i fee like my world is coming down and theres no where to hide no where to find you . you will always be in my hearth and i will never let you go because i love you, your the only one for me. my love for you is like being in space, in my own world its like i can feel my hearth beat a thousand times or more when im with you its like ur the center of my world, of my universe so its simply easy to just be there and just love and never forget that you will always be my one and only ture love . i love you no matter what happens in this life even if we break up i will always love you so even if you dont love me promise me that you will always be there for me no matter what even has a friend you have to promise me you will always be there for me when im down and drepresed , and sad you know ill always be there for you because i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW IVE NEVER FELT THIS WAY ABOUT ANY ONE TILL U CAME ALONG IN TO MI LIFE I NOW I KNOW THAT UR THE ONLY ONE FOR ME I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

When we're together.
Preoccupations not preacupations
Feel not fee.
Nowhere, not no where.
Heart, not hearth.
You're the only one for me.
True, not ture
Depressed, not drepresed.
I'm sure some of those are just typos but you know.
And listen to the person below me about the layout and punctuation stuff.
Keep at it.=)

[Gamma The Body Snatcher]

The punctuation needs a lot of work along with the spelling.
It's...cute- but it took me a long time to read because of the resons above and because of it's layout.