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The Sound of my Heart
The sound of my heart is
a short dark chime
Breathing with life in a
steady, odd time
It's harmony pulsing
With the music of the soul
Shining like glass
black as coal
Ringing so very strong
into the night
It fades and twists
my singing dark light
- by ApolloFlame |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: The sound of my heart
- Artist: ApolloFlame
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Description:
This a poem I was writing. It's probably not really that good but I thought I'd share it to see how people like it.
Thanks!
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: poetry heart singing
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Kathyann97 - 01/29/2010
- pretty good. 3/5
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- Spicesayy - 01/27/2009
- purty gewd
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- Dion Albert Necurat - 07/20/2008
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Very Emo-esque, apollo. wink
I'd say its alright. I'm no expert on poetry, so... - Report As Spam
- Meth Related Nightmare - 07/18/2008
- A little cliche...usually don't go for 2 line stanza poems...but meh. 2.75/5
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- TrashHeapMcGee - 07/17/2008
- Omg. I love it. <3 I love all poems like this but I like this the most. Great good. :]
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