What will you Remember?

• Artist: watermage6549
• Description: A poem I wrote during math last year...
• Date: 07/18/2008
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In the light of day,
far away,
will you remember?

Will you remember the good times
filled with laughter,
or the bad times,
so soon forgotten?

And though friends come and go,
we have met someone,
someone who has touched our soul

In the light of day,
far away,
will you tell?

Will you speak my secrets,
or keep them,
as I have for you?

In the light of day,
far away,
what will you remember?

Comments

[KechiiCoo]

wow! Fabulous! I voted 5.. Even though it's a free-verse poem.. still I an understand the point of the poem... Great job! BTW, can you read mine, too?

[3-11-13 and7s]

...awsome.

[rin1782]

wow you are awsome.....What insiered you?

[xXxXxbabexXxXx]

this pretty gud!!! i agree with balla, you got skills!

[Fake A Smile -xx]

this poem is off the chain.
Girl, you got skills !