It was you, it was Death

• Artist: Charmaine_Ah_Sheh
• Description: Hi all Gaian's, this is a poem I wrote because a poem about the Death was the only idea I could think of. Yes, Death can be really cruel and I don't know what got me into thinking about this, it practically just popped in my head! Please comment and rate this poem and feel free to give me some feedback.
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: poemsdeath

When you came to me I thought it was a game,
When you've stepped closer to me I asked for your name.
When I retreated from you, you did the same.
When you still haven't spoken I've called you lame.
You were so mysterious, I thought.
When I've sought you again, it was the end of my life.
Even as I fell to the tunnel of Death, I could still feel the cold knife.
I didn't bother wondering why you did this to me, because I've figured it out.
That mysterious person was Death itself.

Comments

[KaTeThEpErSoN]

pretty good my advice is to not force yourself to rhyme

[Charmaine_Ah_Sheh]

Please comment on my poem! Thank you very much!