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Why choose war?
I gives nothing,
gains nothing,
and takes lives away.
Why choose war,
people cry,
they weep,
for there loved ones.
Why choose war,
Is it really
the only way?
Choose Peace,
People will
love again.
Choose Peace,
People won't
cry.
Why choose war,
when we
can choose peace.
- by watermage6549 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Why choose war?
- Artist: watermage6549
- Description: I am suddenly inspired.
- Date: 07/18/2008
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- Mr Botty - 07/18/2008
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Very controversial. We could get into this for hours, but this is just a poem.
Looking at it from a poet's perspective, I cannot see where the flow is. It's all kinda sticky... - Report As Spam
- Isa Amarynthia - 07/18/2008
- watermage6549 Your poems is on of akind, its inspirational, and soul touching, plus its stuningly beautiful. i think u should enter a a real poem contest
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