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Defiler's curtain call
Heresy willed by parachutes
Heed the gradient's wish to crack
That will be an asteroid's portion
In flashes it dishevels
Pupils cleansed in unions
You wouldn't know when the sand
Scarfs unrest into the meddling simoon
Serpents charred by tempests
Is it your famed cruelty she's going for
With an aching chest he screams "Demolition!"
Churchyards roasted to the spiral grant
Stay in your seat, boy, hold your knees
See what hastens metamorphosis
You can never mope for an empire
Prodigal checks that stand-out as larks
Pull-over by that circle
Unveiled only once during an equinox
There is a cloak to retake from the bodies
Even if it smells of several hundred commandments
It's a waste to pilfer what has been extended
As persistence for your truant sigh clot
He's a swordbreaker that only responds
To an emotionless gaunt clothed in all but that
Lost riffs don't get pondered on at shorelines
Have you no heart for the erasure
That sees you wanting what's gone
Unbearable for whatever slows the task
Pull-over once more by that circle
It's the final run-in for this equinox
There is a crown to retake and tarnish
Even if it tills kindred torments
Temptations charred by Wyverns
Is it lame amnesty he's going for?
Dumb luck, she wins by a premonition
Churchyards toasted in a grand spiral
Remember this curtain call
Do you hear the gradient's wish to get halved
Necromancy, shrill in every granule
Harvest before the next defilers fear the union
- by Sapphire Rune |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: #835: Equinox
- Artist: Sapphire Rune
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Hello! I'm back with another metaphor-laced piece which is, again, open to different interpretations. My other submission, Orion, showed my soft side. Now's the time to slightly bare my fangs. XD
Please leave comments or opinions because I'm VERY open to them and I take time to realize and internalize compliments and acknowledge my mistakes. Thanks guys! I hope you enjoy unlocking this one. - Date: 07/20/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sapphire Rune - 07/21/2008
- Hahaha LOL. I forgot to punctuate that one! Hey, thanks guys!
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/20/2008
- very good. love it. biggrin now check out my journal biggrin
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- Spirit-senpai Albarn - 07/20/2008
- I really love it. The imagery is simply first-class. The only thing that bothered me, and maybe this was intentional, was the lack of a question mark in the second line of the third stanza. Maybe that's just a personal preference, however. Other than that, amazing.
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- ChristOurSavior-LovesUs - 07/20/2008
- I love it
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