Thoughts Of You

• Artist: XxSoundless ScreamsxX
• Description: I wrote this poem while thinking about my boyfriend one night....and also...if you would like to use my work...please give me credit for it...
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: feelings love thoughts

My mind is fixed
On thoughts of you
All the things you do
You wont come out of my head

Your like a sickness
That I just can't shake
A virus
That won't go away

Why do I love you so?
Why do I care about you so much?
Why do I worry about you?
Why does my heart act this way?

Its unexplainable
Its undeniable
Its unchangeable
Its unreal

Its a feeling
That wont go away
That I cant stop
That just wont end

This feeling
I never want it to end
This feeling
Is true love

Comments

[queffers10]

very good, even if i feel the opposite about my bf

[sexey tiney]

very expresive. not as good as the one about jesus and all. quite simple but yet in a way its somthing i which people can respect what youre sayin. just amazing.

[DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj]

now this is writing this is so AMAZING!!!!!!!! this is wat i am talking about this is the writing tat is better than the frist 1 and it is better and not gross!!!!!!! nice no it is beautiful work!!!!

[studdastep]

you're a little bit obsessive, aren't you? Seriously, i did like it. 4/5

[rosemidnight17]

I really enjoyed it. I really like the un- words. they added color to the poem making it different. keep up the good work!