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Pain consumes you
You fall to your humble knees
Breaths are sharp
Clench your chest
The shadow leaves you
You start to go numb
Pain is ever strong
It finally breaks
Leaving you crying, healing
It is shattered for now
Though, it will be whole when you find the one
- by Lenore Alucard |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Healing Pain
- Artist: Lenore Alucard
- Description: This is written in my own style. There are NO punctuation errors.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: heal pain whole heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Jubz Jay - 07/25/2008
- thats a cool poem....
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- M I K E G A L V A N - 07/22/2008
- ......that is how I feel good to know ........yea........i give you 5 stars
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- Rozoko - 07/20/2008
- Not bad. I noted it's your own style as you put it... however the scheme of it eludes me. It's like there's not a lot of structure to it. Other than that, the content and the picture it paints are great. I will give it a 3
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- the pie d00d - 07/20/2008
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This really sums up heartbreak.
I wouldn't really know though as I never have been in a relationship,
but still, 4 star - Report As Spam
- Kekui - 07/20/2008
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i luv it!!!
absolute favorite!!!! - Report As Spam
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