Divorce

• Artist: ZenOni-Good_Demon-
• Description: This is what i wrote one day when i was really effected by my parents divorce I hope you guys like it and if for some reason you want to hear why its important just PM me.
• Date: 07/20/2008
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Two poeple are together
They said their vows and promised forever
Then they went back on their word
The only thing that they knew could,
solve their problems is divorce
This choice filled them with remorse
To go back on their vows
Without asking any whys or hows
they said it had to end,
and inside they felt dead
If they could they would change it
To go back and rearrange it
Unfortunatly its over and done,
even though it destroyed their son
I guess its time to move on
Look at the light of dawn
Learn from mistakes and don't look back
Everyone should follow that fact

Comments

[Amallia Silverfeather]

Really nice and beautiful. I meanin a sad way. Like an intricate Spider Web. ... Oh my God, I just made an allusion to a spider... O.O Ignore that...

It's really amazing. I could see pictures forming in my head, as though I understood what happened. Kind of like in movies. It's great! All stars! ^_^

[Rock_Girl64]

That's such a sad poem. I wish you the best of luck. All stars because of such a good poem, but sad as well.

[ZenOni-Good_Demon-]

Arsouia-It is hard on children because when it happened i was still a child and really the only thing that saved my was maturing because before i matured i will admit my head was really messed up

[Pelvic Sorcery]

i mean 5/5

[Pelvic Sorcery]

wow... im a realy tough rater, and still, 10/10

[Ayarii]

I like how you made everything rhyme. n_n *Sigh* Divorce is always hard to deal with...it's the hardest on the children.

I wish you the best of luck for whatever's ahead. ^w^

[SKBCTayuyaFluteofDeath]

Wow. That's really sad. I'm sorry......and I'm glad my parents are still together.