Queen's Doubt

• Artist: La Cerise Noire
• Description: Something i came up with....plz say what u think!
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: queen

My iron will has faltered,
As it never has before.

My golden crown is rising,
Falling to the floor.

And I see it clear at last,
As if a mist has lifted.

I see the truth that's been there,
And has never shifted.

No matter how I seeked,
Now I see it all before me.

The truth that's been there,
For all to see.

I now see what people have always seen;
The truth about me.

Comments

[Eildre]

I like your poem. 5/5. just ignore the people who gave you less.

[camper5050]

i like how you ended. i wasn't excepting it to be about you. i though that it was going to be about someone else and you were now able to see what was really going on. i like the twist.

[ThA AzN DeViL]

Ignore the person that gave you 3/5, i think it was great, but i swear this poem sounds so dirty lol.

[The Master Demonslayer]

I think the second verse is interesting, as it could pose as symbolism for the world today: rising in technology, health, and other things, but spiraling into an inevitable doom with war, disease, and hatred. Very interesting!

[Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind]

"My golden crown is rising, falling to the floor"? If the crown is rising, how can it fall? I don't get it. 3/5.