I do not feel

• Artist: YaoiBun-Bun
• Description: How I feel, all the time.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: idonotfeel

I do not feel, no love, nor hate, nor sadness, nor pain. I strive to feel, and I need to feel, but no I do not.

When I try to drown, I am alway's found, and the blade is never sharp enough, nor long enough to heal, the wound's that cannot be seen, I cry, I yell, I scream and I bleed, but still no I do not feel.

I feel nothing, and nothing Is all I will ever need...

Comments

[Smoothie De Bootie]

Makes sense to me, and I like the way it's constructed. `4`

[iDotDot]

It's forthe people who have a high IQ and who can actually think. It made sense to me. It's like, you yearn, but then you don't at the same time.
It's like a love/hate thing..
I give it about a 4 star rate.

[KissMy5Ass]

Didn't make any sense to me. *shrugs* I rated it a 1

[YaoiBun-Bun]

It's a very complex poem, and it is about my feeling's at certain times through my life, even though I have not been living long.

[MyfriendsareDohnuts]

You said at the top you need to feel.
You said at the bottom you don't need to feel...?

[SeaTerrors]

That's good.

[Ohh Ketchem]

Oh, wow.
That's deep and mostly sad.
It;s very good.