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Illusions
Was it expected?
The harshness of our words
You jumped to conclusions
In the end our love was just an illusion
You said you loved me
You said you'd always care
Has this world turned up side down?
All the illusions that we shared
You're all that I wanted
You were everything to my
In the end we realized
We were not meant to be
If I said I still loved you,
Would you reject me?
The heart ache you put me through
The loss of the one I cared
One so blind I could not see
In the end I was ignorant
In the end there was an illusion
The illusion was that you cared for me
- by skitter-bug |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: Illusions
- Artist: skitter-bug
- Description: Illusions is dedicated to a break up that I had experienced.
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: illusions
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Comments (5 Comments)
- AmaniPhoebe - 12/09/2008
- i like it. its a little sad. love the title
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- iZ o m b i e-T o a s t - 07/26/2008
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Pretty good.
But I think you should change the word 'my' to 'me' in the line "You were everything to my" - Report As Spam
- Lord Miffy - 07/26/2008
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Very well done.
One of the best I've seen. <33
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- Catch twenty2 - 07/21/2008
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^.^ 5/5
Emotional much biggrin
Well conveyed razz - Report As Spam
- Ratix Farrence - 07/21/2008
- Wow... Deep. Nice job.
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