looking at death and beauty

• Artist: roman_321
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• Date: 07/21/2008
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Posted 07/22/2008 12:55 am
i regret ever miting you
i regret ever loving you
the wasted time
the wasted love
it all disappeared
in a blink of an eye
y does regret have 2 come last
y wont my sorrow and sadness leave me
y wont my urge to kill her stop
y?y?y?


as i hold this gun 2 my head
as i slowly pull the trigger


thers was a moment of silence

then i hitted da floor


then i saw a little girl smiling at me


and with my last gasping breathe i said


"i never thougth the angel of death was filled of lyf"


at that moment is the 1st tym i felt hapi that regret came last

Comments

[roman_321]

sorry for some errors i was pretty sleepy wen i wrote it so sory...

[Yvvki]

OMG TYPE NORmALLLY! D<

please, if ur going to type, please dont be lazy and put y instead of why! I WANT TO ACUALLY READ PROPER ENGLISH... even thought i cant spell sh** i at least try... =_=;; thank you... ((you should read "the monster in me" Or "sasuke's beggining of Hate" that i wrote, our writing has the same emotions, and you might like it ^-^ ))

[WHOAR g a s m]

It's actually really nice poem, but I would suggest cleaning it up completely and fixing all of your spelling errors.

That would actually make the poem look so much nicer. :]