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-Karma-
You said it, said you'd do it again,
Now are you foe, Now are you friend?
You took these things before my eyes,
And turned all of my truths to lies.
How do you plan to do it now?
Now if you do I don't know how,
You take it all and dodge the curse,
But when I'm there I make it worse.
I swear Karma will get you back,
Its runnin' up and down the track,
It'll break you 'fore you even know,
You fall back down into that hole.
You said it, said you'd play it again,
And now you're gone, you're not my friend.
You ran it all into the ground,
You did it just to make the sound.
So now you've gone and done it again,
I told you that this all would end.
You've run unto the end of your game,
And only put yourself to shame.
I swore karma would get you back,
Hunting you up and down the track.
It broke you and you didn't know,
Just how deep you dug that hole.
You did it and it brought you down,
And now I'm not the one who frowns,
When you say that you've got it made,
Instead its Karma that you paid.
- Title: Karma
- Artist: NMetalFox
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Description:
Another of my works that I deem necessary to post on here. Not my best but it was fun to write.
If you liked this one, also be sure to check out some of my other stuff. - Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: karma nmetalfox orchetika
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Comments (7 Comments)
- in my quotation marks - 12/15/2008
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Oooh. Love it <3
<shifty eyes> I burned onto my memory for one of meh mind characters ¬o¬
Aaanyway, it's very good. I'd listen to it, most definitely. Kinda gave me the visual image of a woman about to throttle the man that cheated on her 0__o lol - Report As Spam
- Seducive Pickle - 09/19/2008
- liking it. ;D I sang it with my own guitar and it was great! xD
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- Sincerely Metalhead - 07/31/2008
- oh yea to answer your question on Breakout about if its sung fast...not really...kinda at a medium pace...i tried it fast and it was over too quick, and slow just sounded retarded lol...so i went with a medium pace, cuz it actually fits.
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- Sincerely Metalhead - 07/28/2008
- pretty good, pretty good, i can see this as an actual song
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/23/2008
- I really like it! Karma at its best baby. lol I really like the chorus for this one too. Not one of your best my a**.
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- Amra Rose - 07/22/2008
- it sounds pretty good...i would actually listen to this... wink
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- NMetalFox - 07/22/2008
- Emo? sad This is a rock song. I despise that of emos. Emo music is more like a girlyman with a high pitch voice ranting about how no one loves him in my opinion. This shouldnt be taken as emo.
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