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"The Beatings"
The fear
The hurt
The anxiety
Underneath his shirt
The scars
The bruises
His hope
He loses
The yelling
The screaming
The beatings
So demeaning
No hope
No faith
No choice
No place
Nothing to be done
Nothing you can do
Nothing will be done
The beatings will continue...
- Title: The Beatings
- Artist: Blondy645
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Description:
This poem was inspired by my boyfriend, who lives in an abusive household. I feel realyl srtongly towards stopping abuse. See my profile to learn more.
Also, rate my poem called Misery is Mine - Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: abuse beatings hurt saddness pain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- atsyrk - 12/24/2008
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very good. i <3 it 5/5. hope your BF gets out of his house to someplace safe.
Could u pls read and comment on my stuff? - Report As Spam
- I Drink Male Tears - 07/22/2008
- i don't like this. it's sad. 4/5
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- Blondy645 - 07/22/2008
- sorry, I meant *really not reayl. I'm a fast typer. Comments please!
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