Why?

• Artist: Witchy276
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• Date: 07/22/2008
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Why?
Why must I choose?
Why must I feel for them?
Why can't I love them both?
Why is everything in my world a decision?
I feel like they're tearing me apart and killing me!
God help me!
Please help me figure this out!
I can't sleep,
I can't eat,
I can't even take a step witout thinking about them!
Please tell me what to do!
I cry and cry and I still can't cry out the problem!
Save me!
Somebody!
Anybody!
Tell me why!

Comments

[Atheshya]

This poem is full of rhetorical questions and random exclamations. I find poems like this bland because they don't provide anything other than questions, which they don't even answer. Also, I cannot picture this scene - it has no description or anything along those lines.