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Your words are dribble.
Truthless, unoriginal dribble.
Your insults are old and stale
Just like you.
Babies fresh from the womb are more educated.
And more creative at that.
And your appearance is repulsive.
Monkeys in a zoo flinging feces at each other
Are exponentially more attractive
Than you could ever even dream of being.
Some people should be locked in closets
Hidden away never to be seen
For the sake of other's vision.
You are one such person.
When I look at you,
Vomit is the least
Of the disgusting images brought to mind.
Your hands may strike me.
But my spirit is stronger
Than any physical strength you possess.
How can this be?
Because I found in my heart
The capability to love
Someone like you.
I don't need to put others down
To be happy.
So I'm done.
Because I see now
That even from the start
You and this relationship
Possessed immenent failure.
And my farewell to you is this:
The lifeguards of the gene pool
Should have let you drown.
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- Title: Immenent Failure
- Artist: Hirestel
- Description: I wrote this for a contest on allpoetry.com where you were asked to be as mean as possible towards this guy who was verbally and physically abusive towards his girlfriend. I used inspiration from a past relationship to write this.
- Date: 07/23/2008
- Tags: abuse anger relationships
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Raypg - 12/23/2008
- This is extremely nice. It boosts up the whole "Tough Girl" ego. The ending was hilarious. smile
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- wiccanmother_zoey - 12/17/2008
- This poem made me laugh a little and it also hit pretty close to home. I uesd to write in allpoetry.com under the name 'Zoey Sohma'. Very nice work dear. Keep writing like this. You're doing splendidly
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