5 senses of love

• Artist: HeroineAngel
• Description: i wrote this b/c i think this how ever guy should look at his special girl.
  and also how ever girl should be thought of and treated
• Date: 07/24/2008
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Touch her as is shes as fragile as a porcelain doll.
Look at her like she's the most beautiful person you'll ever meet.
Listen to her like you two are the onley people there.
Breath her in like she's the beast smelling rose in a feild full of dasy's.
Kiss her like she's the sweetest chocolate in a store full of candy-canes.

Comments

[shazza1997]

if you fix it up it could be very good at the moment it is resonably ok it could be better a lot better

[Blue River Sprite]

Don't let them deter you
yes, there are grammar issues but grammar doesn't make a poem
I think it's beautiful
and you completely right, this ISN'T how every guy treats a girl but it is how they SHOULD
5 stars

and rivkah, use you common sense. It was quiet obviously meant to be best. Anyone with half a brain can figure that out... DUH!

[SelenaMelenia]

You really need Psychotherapy -.-

It's horrible and you need to fix your grammar...

and no.. this is not what all guys think...t they're not all 1 person...

If they were... we wouldn't choose any of them because it'll feel like we're cheating on every single other boy and hurting other girls.

Bad choice of poem, HeroineAngel -.-

[rivkah 1]

I'M sorry, the BEAST smelling roses? What is she a were wolf?

[The Aged God]

But what if the girl is into BDSM?

[Cathedral Az]

Grammar issues much?