Silence, Emptiness & Confusion

• Artist: Supreme_Overlord_Master
• Description: It's kind of sad...I wrote it once when I was down and it relates to me and prolly many others. This is my first time sharing any of my poems with you all. Thanks! <3
• Date: 07/24/2008
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Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed

There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray

Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread

Confusion feeds like a stranger inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different, and disdained.

Comments

[Zarfione]

I could have given you a 5 if you rhymed it but at least you made it deep so 4/5

[RainingMusicDawn]

wow that is so deep! it moved me.check my bottled up and pitch black. plz? they're not as good or deep as urs though.