To Whom I Hold So Dear

• Artist: rjbars
• Description: This is a little something I had come to me!
  Makes me wish that at the time I had that someone special!
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: poem love pain

To hear your voice

It's sound so sweet

Like pearls falling

From waters so deep

The mountain's glare

From sun's ray glow

From my arms

You'll never go



To think of you

Its a breath of air

Away from you

A pain must bare

Your presence here

I am so high

With you so gone

My tears will cry

Comments

[Acelin Rae]

I like it. 4 stars. Check out some of my poems.

[rjbars]

Thanks! and will remember for the next one I put up.

[Biochemical Accident]

I read poems frequently. Love poems are the most common form of poetry and usually are the ones that need the least creativity. I think you would have done better adding a bit of punctuation, things like that can really affect the way the reader see's the poem. I give it a two star rating.

[African07Amazon]

that is the sweetest poem i ever seen a guy write.

[maddog012]

if that really happened to you i am sorry