She Sat There

• Artist: Broken_Lie3
• Description: It's a poem i wrote a few months ago when i was really upset because me and a close friend where fighting and becoming non-friends. It was hard time for me. i had some Help Editing this by a friend and i was just wondering what other people thought about it. it has really cut down a lot in size it used to be like 10 stanzas.
  please rate fairly and leave comments.
  Thanks to all who have voted so far!
• Date: 08/07/2008
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Heart in her hands
Eyes on her
Would never look at her the same way
Knew what he would say.

Weird silence
Unspoken words hitting her like a knife
Thoughts pouring out on the pages
A silent tear slid down her cheek

His words always there
She had no say
He didn't listen
They didn’t realize that they where the same.

Comments

[Willis_Nightmare]

One of my friends and i arnet friends anymore, it was very hard to get over. Wonderful poem

[ii-Blu3 Dayz-ii]

i kno exactly how u feel cuz me and my close friend just got into this huge arguement and we're not friends anymore crying