From Dark to Light

• Artist: Wolfs_Night92
• Description: This is some thing that I came up with in my spear time so please don’t sugarcoat it. Thank you & enjoy.
• Date: 08/12/2008
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I see every one I love die in the night.
Why O Why do they die of fright?
Why O Why do I just lie hear tonight?
Why don’t die?
Why can’t I just say bye?
Were am I tonight?
Why do I see light?
I hear him coming then hear her cry for life.
Can they see me?
Am I alive?
I hear him say I love you.
I see him hold her tight.
Were am I tonight?
Why do I see light?
As repeat the questions to my self I see someone in white.
He says ‘Both mother and daughter will live but we have to keep them over night.

Comments

[Koukaikutsuu]

yea. same thing. fix up the grammar and ur good

[Vincent_Iscariot_Key]

Other than grammatical, it's good. Keep on striving to do well, and you might surprise yourself on what you can really write. Overall, good job!

[leeah iss tha name]

....1ST COMMENT biggrin


but omg thats amazing...5/5!