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Love Lyes Within My Angel Wings
My wings have shown me to a better place,
They have allowed me to fly to one place,
That one empty space,
Within your heart shall be filled,
With words coming from my mouth will be spilled,
The feelings I feel shall be shared,
Cause I found that your the first who cared,
When I flew into your heart,
I knew we could never be apart,
Only because my feelings for you,
Has only made my wings soar within you,
Everyday my heart sings,
Cause love lyes within my angel wings...
- Title: Love Lyes Within My Angel Win
- Artist: phinna14
- Description: a poem of love
- Date: 08/22/2008
- Tags: lovepoem
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Vincent_Iscariot_Key - 12/15/2008
- Very good, just minor revisions needed. "Your" is possession, I think you wanted "you're" (you are) in the 7th line. Lyes=lies. Overall, very good.
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