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You are the light that leads me out of the darkness of the night,
You are the one that saves me from the coldness of hate,
You are the girl that love me when there is nothing in my life,
You are the one I what in the darkness of the night.
- Title: the darkness
- Artist: messup568
- Description: darkness of my haert
- Date: 09/09/2008
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lithumn - 09/09/2008
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simple but really good
i can relate 2 this poem - Report As Spam
- Helpline - 09/09/2008
- You are good no doubt you make a good rhyme, however I think more could be added. It needs stanzas to give it a rhythm, that will make it catchy and stand out more. 3/5
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