Shoulder ~ I'm Here for You ~

• Artist: Ritter Mayura
• Description: I got into thhis mood and I found that some of the people in Gaia need a shulder to cry on ~
  
  And that made me inspired to write this song for them as a message that I'm always here to listen to them ~
• Date: 09/16/2008
• Tags: shoulder weissritter weiss mayura

Shoulder ~ I'm Here for You ~

I've been watching you,
Your face can't be painted on canvas.
Your are sad again.

I've been telling jokes,
And some funny stories.
But to you they were nothing.

[Bridge]
Wait a minute, just for a while.
You have forgotten something,
I can be your crying shoulder, remember?

[Chorus]
Go on lean to me and don't hold it,
You can cry it all to the sky,
You cry it all to me.

I'm here waiting for you.
Always keep this in mind,
You are not really alone.

I'm always here to listen to you,
Even the whole day.
To me you are not a nobody.

[Bridge]
Wait a minute, just for a while.
You have forgotten something,
I can be your crying shoulder, remember?

[Chorus]
Go on lean to me and don't hold it,
You can cry it all to the sky,
You cry it all to me.

Comments

[Teragen]

It's Good! Lots of emotion in it. My one problem with it is there is litle or no rythem to it. What i mean by that is, From one lyric to another, there isn't a common sound. Like for example "Shadow of the Day " (using this because that's what i'm listening to) "And the Shadow of the Day, will embrace the world in gray..." Rhymes like that in a normal song provide some rhythem to you song, and make it harder for people to get it out of their heads. 3/5