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When you walked away,
You created a scar on my heart.
You've just ruined not only my day,
But the rest of my life too.
I cannot bear the pain any longer,
Won't someone take my life.
I cannot get any stronger,
I am only growing weaker.
This day feels like years passing by,
I cannot awake from this nightmare.
But soon I shall die,
And it will all be over.
I'm trying to choke back the tears,
It's impossible to bare.
All that's left in me is fear,
But soon everything will come to an end.
- Title: Death
- Artist: Luuxette
- Description: A poem I wrote when I was down...
- Date: 09/16/2008
- Tags: death
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xv-Fallen-x-Angel-vx - 01/05/2010
- this shows nothing at all... maybe you could mix up the sentinces a little and add more feeling... sorry about the mis-pellings
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- CannibalWizards - 12/28/2008
- Magnificent Job! 5/5
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- pap3rbagBlowup - 09/19/2008
- D: hi !!!!!!! 10/10
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- peacekitten65 - 09/16/2008
- it's ok I guess. But um it could use work. You need to fix the meter asap then it will be like 200% better
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- ncroshadow - 09/16/2008
- this is awsome its like i want to die its great a perfect 5
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