poetry

• Artist: II-ihyped-II
• Description: my poetry that i wrote in school sorta sucky
  
  don't ask
• Date: 09/24/2008
• Tags: poetry

In an under ocean view,
You can see me,
And I can see you.
There are fish swiming around,
Not touching the ground.
There are red fish yellow fish green fish too!
They can see me,
And they can see you.
In an under ocean view,
You can see me,
And I can see you.
mrgreen

Comments

[Mousetrap]

grammar nazi on patrol. ^^;;
*swimming.

i liked it a lot though. 3/5. biggrin

[Enzeru Uyoku]

That was really good.
5/5 stars.