Unseen

• Artist: Moonlight Diamond
• Description: This is a true exaggerated story when I sat in a circle of chairs that was very big and a cute guy was sitting across in the circle looking at me. I am too shy to come up to a guy and if he would be too shy, it would be harder for us to talk. And I still remember that time in the meeting house which was in August 2008, so I decided to write a poem.
• Date: 10/01/2008
• Tags: unseen love sight

Unseen

In the crowded house of meeting
There went many things unseen
As we sat in a circle of greeting
On few things I was not too keen

Across I caught eyes with a stare
Followed by my own heart beating
The day's speaker I was unaware
Green eyes let go and I was released

Wondering if I would talk to you
Chances being only a few
My palms began to sweat
A nervous reaction I bet

Every move was followed
Every breath was borrowed
And every look was one remembered

Comments

[xJeriROCKSx]

its very sweet. i went through that too... but mine was at skool. 4/5

[Moonlight Diamond]

Wow! I don't believe you, this poem means a lot to me, but I think I did a crappy job.

[mearmear35]

nice poem. i stared to cry

[Cheating Time]

I like it!

[Xx_Shedo Santori_xX]

It's alright. 3/5