Magical eye

• Artist: iMeesho
• Description: Oh.... well i say it's just a poem i made up. its pretty good i like the ending most of all. yes, its short but peaceful.
  
• Date: 10/04/2008
• Tags: magic inside around

One day when i looked up at the sky,
I saw a magical eye.So one day,
I hope it will look back down on me.
And if it does,I will say,"Oh come look see down on me."

Comments

[MsMarija]

It's too much recurrent words. I think all that is ok, but you could do better