A Girl Like That

• Artist: jajackie
• Description: a poem i wrote, its not about me, its just something i put together...hope you like it.
• Date: 10/07/2008
• Tags: girl like

She thought that no one saw her cry
Her bangs covered her red, puffy eyes
Her heart icy, cold and black
She thought no one would love a girl like that

She wanted to run away, but her problems were there to stay
Her mother, the only one who took the pain away,
Would pull back her hair and tell her she would be okay.
Until that faithful day,
When her mother passed away

She let down her hair and let the tears soak her face,
The pain never went away
At school she would cross her T's and dot her i's
And would act like it was just a regular day

People stared, but never asked,
Hoping that she would just snap back

She thought that no one saw her cry
Her bangs covered her red, puffy eyes
Her heart icy, cold and black
She thought no one would love a girl like that

Until one day, she realized that someone was coming her way
He walked past her everyday
But this day he stopped and took her hand
He brushed her bangs out of her face and with his free hand
Took her bag and looked into her red rimmed eyes

Finally, she realized that someone had seen her cry
He had seen her make her bangs cover her red, puffy eyes
He made the ice around her heart shatter and crack
and with that one look he loved a girl like that.

Comments

[Echo_Cygnus]

This is so powerful, honestly my favourite poem I’ve seen on here.

[RainingMusicDawn]

omg i LOVE it its sooo sweet. I wish that woulds happen in real life......

[P a n d a R a w r x 3]

I love it. :]

[Araukaitear]

It's great, I really like it!

[MizudaMitsuri]

That's so sad. I really liked the ending though. I think it's a great poem because the feelings are expressed so clearly without being over the top. The repetition really helps with doing this; then when the last stanza is written it finishes it off quite nicely since it's similar in structure to the repeated stanzas.