friends

• Artist: Flameandfire
• Description: this is a poem i found and i think its very pretty
• Date: 10/09/2008
• Tags: friends blues

you'r my friend and that is true,
but the gift was given from me to you.
we went thru moments that were good and bad,
even moments that were happy and sad.
you suported me when i was in tears,
we stuck together when we were in fear,

its really sad that it had to be this way,
but it has reached its very last day.
miles away cant keep us apart,
'cause you'll always be in my heart.

Comments

[Composure Of Desantire]

Simple I suppose, nothing wrong with that.
Rate back? smile
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101700483#title

[peacekitten65]

i ike it, but the last line doesn't flow with the rest of it very well.

[Hyper Lauren]

that is pretty

[kairygirl]

this poem reminds me of my childhood